RaptorJesus's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[.Friends.]

nice work

great way to brighten up the day man, i liked it.

[[KK] Leo and Stan]

next time try making something

and uploading it. we've all heard this song, It has tons of videos and if we really wanted to see it with a blue screen, I'm sure most of the viewers with Windows can make that accommodation themselves. How about spicing it up with your own creative talent? I think Rick Ashley would be really pissed if the best you could think of for this song is a blue screen. Make some video to go along with it, or a visualizer of some sort and this could rank something higher.

[Color Explosion]

it's ok as a visualizer

It would be cool if people collaborated to make visualizers like this for the Newgrounds radio. this alone isn't too interesting without music.

bunnyhops6 responds:

I'll try to make it better. Thanks for the idea and appreciation!

[The Koopa Hollywood Board]

Going to log my thoughts..

Loading... Still loading.... what's with the 0:800? loading.. still loading.. FINALLY got to push play. Good play on the overused actors your characters talk about. Flow was very rough, it did not flow well. I think it'd help if you shorten the time between your joke and punchlines.

It really dragged past like the first few moments. I'm still watching but I'd have a hard time keeping this open if I weren't already writing this review. And it looks like you actually put effort into this. Without the background music this conversation would be duller than Ben Stein on downers giving a speech on advanced physics.

Also, what's the point of censoring the word F&*K if you just say it aloud in the audio? If you censor it in the subtitles, it should be bleeped in the audio it would seem to me. Your audio is poor quality (both in hardware and the acting) but I wouldn't mark down so much if the script had better flow.

I give a 3/10 for raw effort. Get some laughs in there, shorten it improve the quality of jokes and timeliness and I'd give it more like a 7/10.

Eastbeast responds:

Long story short I prefer subtle humor to just another generic comedy sketch. As for the word fuck being cencored, that was so there was no explict text and I didn't have to rate it A for adult. Thanks for the review, I only made this in a day and I understand if the humor was a little dry. Otherwise I wouldn't change it for the world.

[Maybe aliens do This]

Not as bad...

as I thought it would be on my first impression. It was actually kind of funny, if it were a bit longer I'd have given a 7 or so. Maybe if it had a compound joke, or something to follow the end up. Keep truckin.

farfenwaffle responds:

Yeah, longer the better. But the layers got really screwed up and we both got kinda tired of the whole thing

[Hank Hill on V]

this would go better on youtube

Since it's just a clip taken from a popular show with audio dubbed... But it was better than some things I see come through here. I almost cracked a smile on this.

[Sellout - LordOfTheRings]

outdated subject matter

it was funny but is this old or something? the subject materal (lord of the rings) is a bit outdated.

[FYAT]

lol

That was funny but I can't even begin to guess what the title has to do with this.

[Immune system D:]

better but..

You got better in production and sound on this one but it seemed way less informative than the last one.

mmautrey responds:

The last one was made in a 2 day length, this one was made in an hour and a half. I did what I could.

[Nervous/Endocrine systems]

would give this much higher score...

if you'd done this with a real voice like your own it could've added SO MUCH! the automated voice killed it. you should do this over, even if you don't have a good voice it'd be better than the automated one.