RaptorJesus's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Legomas Nativity]

Pretty cool christmas submission, well done.

BoMToons responds:

Thankee!

[[KK]pikasurf.gif]

When does it start?

"Pikachu is a butcher and goes on a killing rampage!" When? I waited a looooooong time. I call false advertising. And if this really does happen later in the toon, you should really start the action sooner so you don't the audience.

Kovoto responds:

it starts after 5 minutes

[Color Explosion]

it's ok as a visualizer

It would be cool if people collaborated to make visualizers like this for the Newgrounds radio. this alone isn't too interesting without music.

bunnyhops6 responds:

I'll try to make it better. Thanks for the idea and appreciation!

[The Koopa Hollywood Board]

Going to log my thoughts..

Loading... Still loading.... what's with the 0:800? loading.. still loading.. FINALLY got to push play. Good play on the overused actors your characters talk about. Flow was very rough, it did not flow well. I think it'd help if you shorten the time between your joke and punchlines.

It really dragged past like the first few moments. I'm still watching but I'd have a hard time keeping this open if I weren't already writing this review. And it looks like you actually put effort into this. Without the background music this conversation would be duller than Ben Stein on downers giving a speech on advanced physics.

Also, what's the point of censoring the word F&*K if you just say it aloud in the audio? If you censor it in the subtitles, it should be bleeped in the audio it would seem to me. Your audio is poor quality (both in hardware and the acting) but I wouldn't mark down so much if the script had better flow.

I give a 3/10 for raw effort. Get some laughs in there, shorten it improve the quality of jokes and timeliness and I'd give it more like a 7/10.

Eastbeast responds:

Long story short I prefer subtle humor to just another generic comedy sketch. As for the word fuck being cencored, that was so there was no explict text and I didn't have to rate it A for adult. Thanks for the review, I only made this in a day and I understand if the humor was a little dry. Otherwise I wouldn't change it for the world.

[Immune system D:]

better but..

You got better in production and sound on this one but it seemed way less informative than the last one.

mmautrey responds:

The last one was made in a 2 day length, this one was made in an hour and a half. I did what I could.

[Box Lunch]

lawl

This coulda been front page. Your animation style reminds me of ATHF, cool.

DestructoBox responds:

Thanks man! Any comparison to Adult Swim shows makes us happy.